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Explain the dreams that pervade all nights of solitude and bliss, the thoughts of the one who's never met or even real we'll miss

Or better yet unravel the tale of one a person hates, yet after a kind word and a gentle smile, that anger abates

Tell the story of a man whose lips are always sealed, and a woman who saw that and heart toward him concealed

Constantly in each others' presence but not saying hello, neither of them feeling the need for friendliness to show

Spill the facts about how the girl finally broke the war, complimenting him on something, resetting the score

Imagine the shock on that girls face as when she spoke and said, "Hi," the first time they broke the silence, the man was not so shy

All of the time she had thought that he had had a heart of stone; picture her amount of delight when his smile had grown

Two individuals in the same place who never shared a word, when the whole time the problem was that neither of them had heard

Meditate on that girl's thoughts as the smile grew in her mind, and then she'd sigh because her thoughts had to put her in a bind

Remember the girl who fell in love after a single smile, the woman who had talked only once and not even for a while

Think of then her lasting days watching him from afar, a sadness glazed over her eyes as her heart tended to a scar
Something that came to me. Be kind please, it's really late and I just felt like writing, so go ahead and give comments or critiques, but please be tender. :)
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LynUnderwood Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  New member Hobbyist
Its really good! I love it!! <3
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Takamakamori Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww!!! Thank you so much!!! X3
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LynUnderwood Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  New member Hobbyist
Your welcome! Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6] 
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foxplant Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow I really like this, im a sucker for poems when they rhyme. I also like your vocabulary, you've got nice variation~ 
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Takamakamori Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww, thank you so very much!!! I try my best to mix it up a little. :D
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